yes or no revision 2

Discussion in 'Detailers Domain' started by detailersdomain, Sep 30, 2009.

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Do you like the revision

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  2. No

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  1. detailersdomain

    detailersdomain Administrator

  2. slanguage

    slanguage OD On Detailing

    looks better than the other one.
     
  3. rwisejr

    rwisejr DB Forum Supporter

    Definitely better
     
  4. Carn

    Carn Welcome to Detailing

    Just a suggestion Phil...Why not have the words "for detailers that demand better" fade in after 'DETAILERS DOMAIN" fades out?

    Looks a little busy to me with all the writing permanently in place in the lower right corner.

    Just my 2c, otherwise it looks great :thumb:
     
  5. lifemal

    lifemal Wax on..Wax off

    Why can't I see it?
     
  6. Carn

    Carn Welcome to Detailing

    Photobucket blocked at work maybe?
     
  7. lifemal

    lifemal Wax on..Wax off

    AdBlock was blocking it -- fixed!
     
  8. lonewolf525

    lonewolf525 Jedi Nuba

    Phil, i did not see the first one but this one looks nice.
     
  9. Bunky

    Bunky Guest

    Better. why all the overlap on the text?
     
  10. Legacy99

    Legacy99 Wax on..Wax off

    Looks better, but you really need to work on a logo for DD.
     
  11. NotZeroSix

    NotZeroSix Any Rag Vehicle Washer

    I like the idea of it. But if I might add, try to use actually logos so they are associated to the brands. Also be careful with that Bentley, for a fraction of a second I thought it was a Bentley sponsor.
     
  12. trhland

    trhland Nuba Guru

    wayyy better phil ....
     
  13. MrPolished&Waxed

    MrPolished&Waxed Obsessive Detailer

    you definately should get a logo. but to go with what you have I would put detailers domain top left putting the bentley logo in the background you want your business name to be the first thing you see, put your slogan underneath or to the right and then center bottom the product list.

    2cents
     
  14. slanguage

    slanguage OD On Detailing

    any update on this?
     
  15. detailersdomain

    detailersdomain Administrator

    no update on it yet. working on a few other things like adding more brands first.
     
  16. P1et

    P1et Official DB Moderator

    Better!
     
  17. kei169

    kei169 Wax on..Wax off

    This looks better!
    But, a little bit too much words!
    Maybe the overlap just looks weird to me!
     
  18. ahwil_lim

    ahwil_lim Wax on..Wax off

    Agreed, need to work on a LOGO ...

    Anyway, its much better compared to previous one
     
  19. trhland

    trhland Nuba Guru

    yes!:applause::applause:
     
  20. slanguage

    slanguage OD On Detailing

    Cool :D
     

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