yes or no revision 2

looks better than the other one.

 

Definitely better

 

Just a suggestion Phil...Why not have the words "for detailers that demand better" fade in after 'DETAILERS DOMAIN" fades out?

Looks a little busy to me with all the writing permanently in place in the lower right corner.

Just my 2c, otherwise it looks great :thumb:

 

Why can't I see it?

 

Photobucket blocked at work maybe?

 

AdBlock was blocking it -- fixed!

 

Phil, i did not see the first one but this one looks nice.

 

Better. why all the overlap on the text?

 

Looks better, but you really need to work on a logo for DD.

 

I like the idea of it. But if I might add, try to use actually logos so they are associated to the brands. Also be careful with that Bentley, for a fraction of a second I thought it was a Bentley sponsor.

 

wayyy better phil ....

 

you definately should get a logo. but to go with what you have I would put detailers domain top left putting the bentley logo in the background you want your business name to be the first thing you see, put your slogan underneath or to the right and then center bottom the product list.

2cents

 

any update on this?

 

no update on it yet. working on a few other things like adding more brands first.

 

Better!

 

This looks better!
But, a little bit too much words!
Maybe the overlap just looks weird to me!

 

Agreed, need to work on a LOGO ...

Anyway, its much better compared to previous one

 

yes!:applause::applause:

 

Cool