hey guys, im looking for some feedback on my new website! please let me know what you think! www.scheerdetailing.com
Just did a quick look, the links on the top (products, ext) should all be on one line. I am showing 2 lines with Detailing Services and Contact Me on a second line. Also the products section looks very busy, maybe put them in a list on just in a column. Edit: But the layout and quality of the pics does look great. Also dont know if you can link to personal detailing webpage, but I will leave that to the mods.
There are numerous letters that should be capitalized throughout the entire site, mostly consisting of "i" and a few others. I think that certain areas have too much text and feel a bit cluttered, but the layout and focus of your site are spot on. Nice job!
Only thing is on your About Me page you have a ton of "i" when they should be capitalized. Takes away from the professional look you are going for and makes it look like you texted the information.
A good marketing tip is to take the I's and make them into you's what you can do for the customer. People are selfish and like things directed to them.
I just gave it a quick skim... below are my observations In some areas you refer to your business as "I" in others you refer to it as "We".. Choose one There are quite a few grammatical errors (not spelling).. Some people discriminate on younger people working on their vehicles.. In your "about me" section it is obvious that you are 20 years old.. Obviously once they meet you they will be able to notice this but, hopefully by that time you have made a positive impression that surpasses any reservations they may have about your age...
damn site looks good man. Professional and very informative. Business must be good out their if you are driving a M3 LoL. I can't wait to get my hands on a M3 Sedan . . . . . they are so sweet and your car is modded so damn nice! Is that a lease or financed?
